carnimirie: ([cg] ✗ break from my cocoon ✗)
rowan ★ like i've never seen the sky before ★ ([personal profile] carnimirie) wrote in [community profile] sharp_pastels 2008-10-21 10:30 pm (UTC)

I really like a lot of the coloring, especially in the Aang icons for Avatar, and a bunch of the Kiddy Grade. There's a lot of really neat cropping; my favorite for that would have to be CG 29, though I think I'd like that without the text better. I think something that you could work on for next time would be use of text, esp. playing with the color and angling. I think CG 60 would look better if the text was a lighter hue, perhaps white or gray, and angled instead of straight across, so that it's parallel to her eyes; would look really cool. But overall, a very nice batch! I think the thing that stands out the most (in a positive way) are the bright, vibrant colors.

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